(三分钟)快速提高雅思作文技巧

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刚刚过完教师节，但是对于布谷龙途的老师们来说，学生的学业永远是第一位的，本职工作和我们的追求一分钟也没有停歇。学生的好成绩和家长的满意才是教师们最大的欣慰。

即使是在教师节，我们的名师也为大家总结了雅思写作的精华，能让你在短时间内提高自己的写作技巧。小布在此要感谢我们的名师辛勤的总结和付出。下面小布就带大家来看看如何短时间提高雅思写作技巧。

首先，我们来引述几条乔治·奥威尔讲过的写作原则：

●Ⅰ. Never use a long word where a short one will do.

能用简短的单词的时候就别用长的。

●Ⅱ. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.

如果可以砍掉某个词，砍掉它。

●Ⅲ. Never use the passive where you can use the active.

能用主动时态的时候就别用被动时态。

●Ⅳ.Never use a foreign phrase, ascientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.

如果你能想到一个相当的日常英语词汇，就不要用那些外来短语，科学词汇，或者行话术语等。

●Ⅴ.Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.

在你说出任何完全不着调的话之前打破上面的任何一条规则。

真的好的写作，必须要注意逻辑的闭环，并且遵循精简、变化、重复的原则。乔治·奥威尔、丘吉尔、威廉·津瑟等等英语文豪都明确提出过语言只是载体，它是表述思想的工具，词汇和句型上的变化是为了能够更好的传递的思想，反之，则属纯粹多余。

下面，小布给大家一篇刚出炉的2021年9月4号机考例文:

Some people say that the government should support the scientific researcheven it has no practical use. Do you agree or disagree this statement?

Scientificresearch is the gate wayto equip the society and people with the ability to evolve and develop. But not all types of researches are directly related to people’s daily lives, which are those alleged impractical researches. In fact, although some researches may not serve to the public or provide people with a more convenient life temporarily, they possess their own merits and will one day contribute to the human kind in different ways. Therefore, the government should support the scientific research even it has no practical use.

1 Gate way 大门生动具体的表达 比如 Hard work isthe gateway to success.辛勤工作是通往成功之路。

同样的表达还可以用 pave the way。

2 allege 认为 在众多的“认为think等“ 中，这个词表示非常坚定地认同，（相当于assert）但是却毫无依据。

所以这个认为后面的观点一定是你不同意的。

3 有although 不能有”但是“的语法错误，可不能再犯了哦。

Most people usually only see the impractical aspect of the science research and then jump to conclusion that it is mindless and useless; few people can concern about the rationale of the research, which will actually pave the way for another discovery in a practical use.For example, in the past a lot of scientists and biologists were engaged in researching the body structure of the characteristics of the fish, which seemed to be a waste of time and havenothing to do with people. But because of this simply research, researchers made a practical use of fish’s streamlined body to construct the airplanes and cars, which can deplete the resistance and speed up. Therefore,people should pay attention in those minor aspects that may be extremely giant progress in another area.

1 jump to conclusion 得出结论

2 rationale 理由;逻辑依据

例句 The plan was criticized for its lack of rationale.

该计划因缺乏根据而遭到批评。

3 be engagedin 参与 加入

He was busily engaged in painting the furniture.

他忙于粉刷家具

4  minor aspects 微小的方面 extremely giant progress 巨大的进步

用两个反义词来形容无用科学研究的重要

While people are sparing no effort on doing the complex and toilsome researches which may be impractical, they can in return develop both themselves and all the people in the society. As researchers and scientists are busy working on designing the aircrafts used for traveling in space, they grasp the importance of being exceedingly careful and attentive because they know a minor mistakemakes tremendous difference. At the same time, the public will absorb experience from the failure of launching due to thelacking of unity in the team in 1986. Those evolutions are on the mental aspectaside from only about knowledge, even though the research is regarded as notbeing associated with human’s daily life.

1 are sparing no effort on doing  努力

2 toilsome 费力的

3 in return  反过来

4 absorb experiencefrom the failure of launching失败乃成功之母

So many benefits can doing these researches bring us that even though they are not recognized as practical commonly, they can contribute to other areas and helping people to evolve, as well as building a bridge for the further discoveries.

1 be recognized as被认为

2 contribute to doing 带来 导致的因果句

3 as well as 而且

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