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同文部小学 英语创意写作获奖作品展示

在同文小学部，英语写作是一件快乐的事情。学期末同文小学的英语老师们对同学们的写作作品进行了评比，快来看看获奖同学的作品吧。

In Tongwen primary school, English creative writing is a happy thing. At the end of the semester, the English teachers evaluated the students' writing works. Come and have a look at the works of the winning students.-Grade 4  四年级-

My dream job 

我的理想职业

作者：Alina   国籍：澳大利亚

指导教师：Penny&Samina

What would happen to the world without doctors? Doctors are the lifesavers of the community. Doctors help whenever they get the chance. Even though doctors don’t have any superhero powers, they can still save a whole community. This is I think being a doctor is the ideal job for me. 

One important reason that want to be a doctor is because I could save lives. This is important because by saving a person that person could go on to save others. For example if I saved a police officer that police officer could go catch more criminals on the loose. 

Accordingly, being a doctor means traveling to different places. This is a very “ first time opportunity ”for me. I would love to travel and learn new skills. For example if I was helping in a surgery I could use different methods to help the patient.

Consequently I would make more friends. Making friends is very important for a doctor because you will get advice and earn trust from people of other places, while expanding your knowledge and beliefs. 

In summary being a doctor would be the perfect job for me because I could save lives, travel to different places and make good friends.

如果没有医生，这个世界会发生什么？医生是社区的救星。医生一有机会就帮助他们。即使医生没有任何超级英雄的能力，他们仍然可以拯救整个社区。这是我认为医生是我理想的工作。

想成为一名医生的一个重要原因是因为我可以拯救生命。这一点很重要，因为通过拯救一个人，这个人可以继续拯救其他人。例如，如果我救了一名警察，警察就可以抓住更多的逃犯。因此，当医生意味着去不同的地方旅行。这对我来说是“第一次机会”。

我喜欢旅行并学习新的技能。例如，如果我在做手术，我可以使用不同的方法来帮助患者。因此，我会交更多的朋友。交朋友对医生来说非常重要，因为你会从其他地方的人那里得到建议和信任，同时扩展你的知识和信仰。

总而言之，当医生对我来说是一份完美的工作，因为我可以拯救生命，到不同的地方旅行，结交好朋友。

My Dream Job

我的理想工作

作者：Kai   国籍：新加坡

指导教师：Penny&Samina

Do you know what is a pilot? A pilot is a guy who flies a plane. I think being a pilot is a great dream job for me.

First, I know how to fly a plane. If I know how to fly a plane, then I can fly to anywhere by myself. I don’t have to buy the ticket and wait for the plane. I can also travel with my friends. Maybe my friends will be happy because we can travel together.

In addition, I can also make friends with the crew mates. They can help me when I’m in trouble of something.

The last, I can also earn lots of money. I can buy a sports car. Nevertheless, I can also buy food for the poor.

To conclude, being a pilot is my best dream job. I can earn lots of money.I will know how to fly a plane. Aren’t these skills great?I can’t wait to be a pilot!

你知道什么是飞行员吗？飞行员是驾驶飞机的人。我认为成为一名飞行员对我来说是一份理想的工作。

首先，我知道如何驾驶飞机。如果我知道如何驾驶飞机，那么我可以自己飞到任何地方。我不必买票等飞机。我也可以和朋友一起旅行。也许我的朋友们会很高兴，因为我们可以一起旅行。

此外，我还可以和船员交朋友。当我遇到麻烦时，他们可以帮助我。

最后，我也可以赚很多钱。我可以买一辆跑车。尽管如此，我也可以为穷人买食物。

总之，当飞行员是我最理想的工作。我可以赚很多钱。我将知道如何驾驶飞机。这些技能不是很好吗？我等不及要当飞行员了！

-Grade 5  五年级-

The Sloppy Waiter

马虎草率的的服务员

作者：Nicole   国籍：新加坡

指导教师：Penny&Samina

One sunny morning, Alice and her mother went to a grand restaurant. 

“Mom! I see the restaurant! It’s over there!” exclaimed Alice, pointing to a restaurant called “The Grand Restaurant“. Alice and her mother strolled in and found a comfortable seat. Her mother ordered a bowl of salad and Alice ordered a huge strawberry cake. 

“Hm… We have no more waitress… can you serve, boy?” asked the manager, talking to the new waiter.

“Oh! Uh… m-me?” the new waiter stuttered, hoping that he manager wasn’t talking to him. 

“Yes, you” replied the manager. 

They kept quarreling until the new waiter had no choice but to serve. 

“Uh…. Your salad, M-Miss,” muttered the waiter. 

“Here you g-Ahh!” screamed the waiter as the bowl of salad slipped down onto Alice. 

“Waaa…!” sobbed Alice, covered in greens and tomatoes.

Her mother grabbed a napkin and immediately bended down to help Alice clean up. 

The waiter nervously asked, “Uh.. can I-I help?” Alice’s mother just glared angrily at the ungraceful waiter. 

“Well, what are you waiting for?”

So the waiter helped Alice’s mother to clean up the sloppy mess he made. 

After that the waiter sincerely apologized so Alice and her mother forgave the waiter. The manager was very angry to hear that the clumsy waiter spilled everything, so he made the waiter served them the dish again, but this time he had to do it properly and gracefully. 

The waiter promised to do it nicely this time and tried his best. In the end, Alice and her mother got to eat a delightful and delicious breakfast.

一个阳光明媚的早晨，Alice和妈妈去了一家大饭店。

“妈妈！我看到餐厅了！在那边！”Alice指着一家叫做“大饭店”的餐馆惊叫道。Alice和她妈妈走进来，找到了一个舒适的座位。她妈妈点了一碗沙拉，Alice 点了一个巨大的草莓蛋糕。

“嗯……我们没有服务员了……小伙子，你能为我们服务吗？”经理问，与新来的服务员交谈。

“哦！呃……我吗？”新来的服务员结结巴巴地说，希望经理没有跟他说话。

“是的，就是你”经理回答。

他们一直吵架，直到新来的服务员别无选择，只好上菜。

“嗯……你的沙拉，小姐，”服务员咕哝道。

“给你，g-Ahh！”当一碗沙拉滑到爱丽丝身上时，服务员尖叫道。

“哇……”Alice啜泣着，浑身是绿色和西红柿。

她的母亲抓起一张餐巾纸，立即弯下腰来帮Alice打扫卫生。

服务员紧张地问：“呃……我能帮忙吗？”Alice的母亲只是愤怒地瞪着那个不礼貌的服务员。

“那么，你还在等什么呢？”

于是，服务员帮Alice的妈妈收拾了他弄得乱七八糟的东西。

之后，侍者真诚地道歉，所以Alice和她的母亲原谅了侍者。经理听说笨手笨脚的侍者把所有东西都洒了，非常生气，所以他让侍者再次给他们端上了这道菜，但这一次他必须正确而优雅地做。

服务员答应这次要好好做，并尽了最大努力。最后，Alice和她的母亲吃了一顿美味可口的早餐。

-Grade 6  六年级-

Snail Roasts

蜗牛烤肉

作者：Bala Avaneesh Guhan  国籍：印度  

指导教师：Penny&Samina

In the rusty planet ReedsadXO1, astronaut Nick Davids arrives on his colorful rocket. The rocket shines like chunks of gold, the fire dazzles in the air. 

On 2080 February 3rd, the astronaut awakes from his deep slumber.When he gazes the view full of dusty rocks and brown swamps, he spots a green creature.The creature’s nano-eyed look terrifies him. The beast’s 17 legs and 17 hands horrors him; The huge character’s filthy fingers scare him. But the courageous astronaut steps down with mega guns and blue color saber lights and faces reality. He trudges to the green creature with heroic bravery. 

However, the emerald creature seems to be friendly, and he enquires him for a pink and green, tri-layered sandwich and a 3-gallon, maroon color orange and rock juice.Only because Nick was hungry, so he accepts the invitation. He saunters into a sapphire-pink crater and devours the delicious meal filled with snail roasts, green and yellow grasshopper curry, and some ice cream with the flavor of coal with pink rock powder on it.

“Thanks for your delightful meal. “Nick declares. 

“You’re welcome. ” answers the creature.” Your always welcome.”   

在锈迹斑斑的ReedsadXO1行星上，宇航员尼克·戴维斯乘坐彩色火箭抵达。火箭像金块一样闪闪发光，火焰在空中闪耀。

2080年2月3日，宇航员从沉睡中醒来。当他凝视满是灰尘的岩石和棕色沼泽的景色时，他发现了一个绿色生物。这个生物那双纳米眼睛的样子吓坏了他。野兽的17条腿和17只手让他感到恐惧；这个巨大角色肮脏的手指吓坏了他。但这位勇敢的宇航员带着巨型大炮和蓝色军刀灯下台，面对现实。他英勇地跋涉着走向绿色生物。

然而，这只祖母绿生物似乎很友好，他向他要了一份粉红色和绿色的三层三明治和一杯3加仑的栗色橙汁和摇滚汁。只是因为尼克饿了，所以他接受了邀请。他漫步在一个蓝宝石色的陨石坑里，狼吞虎咽地吃着美味的蜗牛烤肉、绿黄色的蚱蜢咖喱，还有一些带有煤炭味道的冰淇淋，上面还有粉红色的石粉。

尼克说：“谢谢你的美餐。”

“不客气。”生物回答道。”永远欢迎您。”

下面还有两名同学在写作上取得了非常大的进步，我们为这两名同学取得的成绩感到非常骄傲。让我们来读读他们的文章吧！

Here are two students who have made great progress in their writing, and we are very proud of them. Let's read their articles.

-Grade 5  五年级-

If I were an animal

如果我是一个动物

作者：Leo  国籍：中国

指导教师：Patrick&Katherine

If I could be an animal, I would be a giraffe. 

I could have a long neck.It can be help me to eat the food on the tree. 

I have many  spots on my body. I live in Africa.It’s very hot there. Some fruits are on the trees but the tree has many leaves. 

Drinking is very difficult to because my neck is so long. 

So I need to put my legs apart. Sometimes I will fall down in the river. 

如果我能成为动物，我想成为长颈鹿。

我有一个长长的脖子。它可以帮助我吃树上的食物。

我身上有很多斑点。我住在非洲。那里很热。树上有一些水果，但树上有许多叶子。

喝水很难，因为我的脖子太长了。

所以我需要把腿分开。有时我会掉进河里。

-Grade 6  六年级-

If I were an animal

如果我是一个动物

作者：Lisa  国籍：中国

指导教师：Patrick&Katherine

If I were an animal, I would be a whale. 

I would have a large body. I have big, sharp teeth and I have a big, black and bright eyes.I have a big grey tail. I have a grey body and underneath I have a white belly.

I live in the ocean. I like water and air.My mouth is very big. I can eat a lot of small fish.Sometimes, I like to eat people, too. I like swimming with my parents. 

My parents tell me not to swim with white sharks.

I like whales because we are big and beautiful. 

如果我能成为动物，我就会成为鲸鱼。我会有一个很大的身体。我有一颗又大又尖的牙齿，还有一双又黑又亮的大眼睛。我有一条灰色的大尾巴。我有一个灰色的身体，下面有一个白色的肚子。

我住在海里。我喜欢水，但我也喜欢空气。我的嘴很大。我可以吃很多小鱼。有时候，我也喜欢吃人。我喜欢和父母一起游泳。我父母告诉我不要和白鲨一起游泳。

我喜欢鲸鱼，因为它们又大又漂亮。

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